Perhaps that seems an odd statement on my part but, as the cover art has been defined for Evolutions and our contracted interior illustrations filter in through Kevin's diligence and the artist's hard work, I am struck at how the all of our efforts are coalescing the reality of the first issue. The fiction has been there for a while, obviously. Only now, though, with pictures arriving to accompany those words, does it hit me that I've inadvertantly created something greater than the mere sum of its parts.
Case in point, Gustavo's excellent near-future piece "Defending Fjordland" now has its illustration art by Jennifer Miller. Jennifer did an excellent job of capturing the intent in Gustavo's story using a wonderfully rendered kakapo with a shadowy menace lurking below. I don't want to ruin it for everyone, but I am sincerely pleased with the work and very happy that Jennifer plans on coloring it and selling prints to support kakapo preservation efforts in New Zealand. My dearest hope is that the "tip jar" system we're working to adopt will reward her and Gustavo both beyond the meager amount I'm able to offer them up front, as I do for all my contributing artists and authors.
What the meshing of Gustavo and Jennifer's talents showed me was that I'm not wrong. When you couple great words and wonderful art, you get something more than just mere prose. Stories by themselves can entertain but, just like with a meal, the presentation counts. How something is shared can increase or decrease the enjoyment of consumption.
As I take a deep breath in preparation for the final copyediting, writing, and assembly of the first issue, I'm recognizing how much my friends and contributors have done to create something far more impressive than I ever could have imagined back in Syracuse last November.
Of particular note is that I've started posting the bios of our various contributors on our Authors and Artists page. It's still a bit of a work in progress, but things are definitely looking more professional.
Check it out at: http://www.darwinsevolutions.com

You'll note Mr. James Patrick Kelly's presence on the cover as well. Inside this issue, they're celebrating his 25th "June" story, which I suppose means that he's had other non-June stories as well, as well as the 10th year anniversary of his web commentary column.
From Asimov's submissions guidelines:
"Asimov's will consider material submitted by any writer, previously published or not. We've bought some of our best stories from people who have never sold a story before."
And with that, I think I just wander off into town, whistling innocently.
Of course, my second place finish in the Jim Baen Memorial Writing Contest is actually a rejection with goodies, so it's targeted for Analog or Asimov's next. I'm thinking Asimov's.
Funktisy and Schism Function, for all it's glory, rejected my story "Nymph", so it's probably a good time to send that one on to Analog.
Whoa. I need to fire up my printer.
However, that being said, there's a bit of graffitti on the old Fleener building in downtown Bloomington near the post office that I always tell myself "I need to take a picture of that before it gets ruined. Last week, I finally did:

Yeah, the composition sucks. Sue me. The point I wanted to capture, though, was that someone had a sense of style about their art, even if it is a copy instead of an original (I've got no idea on that score). Since the brain-dead defacement ganger tag is intruding on the left, it makes a kind of statement to me that contrasts the destructive and stupid tendencies of human societies against the creative and beautiful.
It's really easy for kids to not bother thinking and fall into the lazy and infantile mold of ganger tags and following other human trash bent on ripping things apart and spitting on that which makes them realize that they're not living any kind of worthwhile life. However, making something of yourself and creating rather than destroying takes effort and no small amount of courage. The person who painted the girl gets my respect for taking ugly wafer board as a canvas for creativity and uplifting the world a little bit. The idiotic taggers who marred that canvas would best be served by being knocked on the ground, repeatedly tazed in the genitals, and made to swallow their Wal-Mart Krylon whole cans at a time. They wouldn't be missed or mourned after the inevitable poisoning took effect.
"Darwin,
"Your story "Skipping Stones" was the second place winner in the Jim
Baen Memorial Writing Contest. You will be receiving a prize package made up of various Baen Books, Jim Bane's Universe and National Space Society merchandise. And a one year membership to the National Space Society.
"Of course your name and the title of the story will be announced in Jim Baen's Universe and the program book for this years International Space Development Conference.
"Please make sure I have your current mailing address.
"Congratulations!"
Well. Hush my mouth.
That said, some stories do benefit from the presence of a short -- SHORT -- lead in. Especially if the lead is not paragraph after paragraph of exposition.
Because the structure of The Legend of Pup is that of a series of short stories representing personal reminiscences, I realized that a bit of hooked scene setting would help ground the reader and set up expectations that would smooth the narrative entry. I think it does that job admirably but then, I'm biased.
From "The Legend of Pup":

- Mood:
excited
The page count was 238, if memory serves. The cover price was $1.75. I opened one issue at random and looked at the table of contents. There were four novellettes/novellas listed and a baker's dozen short stories.
Then a name (besides Asimov's) jumped out at me: Nancy Kress.
"Hey," I thought, "I know Nancy." It was kind of a cool moment seeing how she'd been involved in the industry for so long i.e. 25 years.
Time passed and I found myself at Barnes and Noble in the periodicals section. I opened up a copy of Asimov's I saw there (cover price of $4.99) and who's name should I see but...
Nancy Kress.
Um...
Creepy.
Then again, not. You see, editors are creatures of both habit and comfort at times. Thus, seeing writers re-appear in a magazine is not unusual at all. In fact, it's one of the reasons that newcomers have such a hard time. Because an established, known quantity is far easier to accept than having to plow through and work with the slush.
One of those little pains in the butt about this industry. Hopefully, Evolutions won't fall on that particular sword anytime soon.
- Mood:
thoughtful
Stories in Issue 2:
The Angels of St. Ambrose by C. Mitchell O'Neal
Professional Choice by Lazette Gifford
Ghost Chimes by Nancy Fulda
Contamination by Karen C. Evans (Odd End)
Stories in Issue 3:
Twenty Thousand Light Years to Lilliput by William Ward
Epilogue by Jane Chirgwin
Doggy Paddling by Casey Fiesler
Strange Day by Lorne Kates
- Mood:
busy
The days were fun but always something of a Chinese fire drill.
Now I find myself Janet's virtual equivalent. I have to take the art Kevin finds and the stories I've bought and put them together with computerized cut-and-past to create something people can read in a sequential fashion. So, I swap hats between being a lead editor, a proof reader, a layout whatever-you-call-it, payroll administrator, article writer, and whatever else needs to happen. Eventually I'll script and voice the podcast bits and have to oversee piecing that together.
It can be a bit overwhelming, especially since the day job needs to be primary in order to pay bills and my weekends are given over to being as much daddy as I can be for Friday night through Sunday night. Being a commuter father sucks, but that's the hand I've been dealt.
Oh, and I'd really like to be thought of as a writer, too. Since I'm getting rejection letters, I'll assume that I'm giving at least glancing service to that aspect of my life.
In any case, I need to sit down with my project planner and make sure all my loose ends are pulled together into one cohesive direction of effort. With our premier issue date rapidly closing in, I don't have spare time to curl into a ball and suck my thumb.
- Mood:Harried
Back at WFC last November, in the company of various friends representing differing aspects of genre fiction, the mission was fairly straightforward if vaguely defined: run a monthly webzine that offers good stories in as many different end-formats as possible. The truth is, though, that actually undoing the "vague" part of those definitions has proven to be where the work lives.
I shouldn't have been surprised. Engineering works the same way. The devil Murphy lives in the details, after all.
The forums for Darwin's Evolutions are now open for new user registration.
http://www.darwinsevolutions.com/xoops
Things are very generic at the moment, but I think user input will prove to be very necessary to fine tune the functionality and look of the interface. Please register and join the brand new community. Your input may well drive the look and "feel" of Evolutions.
The First Annual Darwin's Evolutions Halloween Story Contest! (To be released in our September issue.)
(Yay! Cue thunderous applause)
Write a story that captures the flavor of the holiday in the most unique and entertaining way that doesn't offend the crap out of me and win a prize! All of our usual submission guidelines (and my own comments on this blog) apply. So, slip those streams and come up with something uber-cool that the readers just won't want to put down.
All prizes will be cash payouts over and above our normal per word payments.
First prize will be $100 plus the cover art will be based on your story, guaranteed.
Second prize will be $50.
Third prize will be $25.
Of course, all three winners get bragging rights AND a hardcopy print of the September Evolutions issue from Lulu or whoever is supplying our PoD dead tree versions.
I'll be killing the contest slush, but final judging will be done by a panel of my professional friends whom I shall guilt into helping me. No, they shall not be named until after the contest, so give up any nascent hopes of chocolate or cash bribery.
So get cracking! Be sure to put "Halloween Contest" in the subject line of your submission e-mails to "newfictionsubs@darwinsevolutions.com".
- Mood:
cheerful
- Mood:Vexed
While I'm in no big rush to give John another chance to come in here and up his controversy click-throughs by playing big dog and pissing on my karma (whatever the hell that is), I think the question does a better job of illustrating his focus rather than querying the actual state of the market itself. That having been said, the question of the state of the short fiction market -- and genre fiction's economic potential in general -- really does need a deeper look than what, on the surface, appears to be an issue of pay.
Two of my colleagues now have books visible on Baen's on-line schedule, which means they're most probably available for pre-order from Amazon.
Slow Train to Arcturus by Dave Freer is an adventurous more or less hard-SF story that rotates around a conceivable idea for generation ships and colonization. As with all of Dave's work, it comes across at many, many levels and is far deeper than a first surface reading might appear, especially in a wonderful social commentary/scientific insight sort of way.
Gentleman Takes a Chance by Sarah Hoyt is a sequel to her original Shifters series starter, Draw One in the Dark (Please do not be put off by the abomination of a cover shown on Amazon. That was the orignal waste ink hardcover art that tried to kill the series in the cradle. The new Baen paperback cover is the correct one.) The Shifters series is good urban fantasy fun and very entertaining with a wider variety of were-beings coming together around the George diner, which results in lots of mayhem and confusion coupled with laughs. (Beware the RLF!)
Go forth and pre-order if your reading tastes align with these books even the slightest. Both are excellent reads worthy of your support and pre-ordering helps buoy their sales.
Then yesterday, between Fort Wayne and Anderson on southbound I-69, it all gelled. I knew how I wanted to tell the story. The view of the novel as a series of individual shorts that would sequentially build up a whole picture of the main character's life and achievements linked together by interstitial narrative involving an after-action debriefing team was right there.
Epiphanel moments like that are both exciting and a bit creepy. Sometimes knowing that we have an active sub-conscious grinding away at data where we can't see can throw our feelings of solidity about reality into question. Still, when a solution like this just seems to "pop" into being, you can't help but think, "Whoa. Cool."
- Mood:
contemplative
